Rewriting the Novel: Landmark

Okay, I’ve finished that gaping hole of a middle chapter that only read ‘Build tension” and now that the plot is straightened out I am back to the fun stuff.

1. Shift non-vital descriptions and exposition out of chapter one, shift all the post-resolution details I can to the last chapter.
2. Make a pass to emphasize every one of the senses.
3. Search for every time I write the words “I felt” so I can show-not-tell.
4. Add stronger feelings to the midpoint.
5. Plot the dates and the moon and how much money she has.
6. Make every character’s voice distinct.
7. Correct when minor characters disappear for long stretches.
8. Simplify points when she shows up in five different settings in one chapter.
9. Lop out everything that gives me pause, except for the aunts; they need to go back in but not as dialogue.

Nine passes left instead of seventeen. Tedious chapter conquered. Let the fun return.